Sunday, October 11, 2015

Over

A trajectory
passing from start to finish
over a lifetime

Mind Over Matter
Robert Klein's song and album
plays with me through life

Nothing is over
Even after it's over
Nothing is over

I get over you
over and over again
I'm not over you

I'm not over you
and we barely even met
It's not you or me
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8 comments:

  1. UnknownOctober 12, 2015 at 3:21 AM

    Lovely set of haiku ... I enjoyed the read! Bastet

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  2. Reading PleasureOctober 12, 2015 at 10:26 AM

    Interesting set.

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  3. UnknownOctober 12, 2015 at 11:02 AM

    You know what people say? It isn't over until its over! Great job on the haiku! ♥

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  4. UnknownOctober 12, 2015 at 4:19 PM

    that is such a stark reality of life, and you penned it so well Neil.. sharing it :-)

    Cheers, Archana
    http://drishti.co/2015/10/11/pondering/

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  5. Manisha SharmaOctober 12, 2015 at 11:09 PM

    Its a beautifully penned peom, Neil :) I have a have question though, usually haiku has a set of 5/7/5 syllables, with form of haiku is the one that you have chosen?

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  6. AnonymousOctober 13, 2015 at 3:11 AM

    That's an amazing Haiku and intense words:)

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  7. rabbi neil fleischmannOctober 13, 2015 at 8:03 PM

    Thanks all.

    This is a string of 5 7 5 haiku together. I call it a haiku chain. Though I wrote them separately and not in this order. And they do stand alone, I hope.

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  8. Milan RajkumarOctober 14, 2015 at 1:02 PM

    So deep as usual !

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