My Haiku
Sunday, August 9, 2015
774 - 775
There's an opening
Let it let the light inside
Let it let you see
Sit by the window
and see what might not be there
See past the brick walls
Inspired by Haiku Horizons' prompt - "Window"
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jazzytower
August 9, 2015 at 12:35 PM
Well said!
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Alice
August 9, 2015 at 9:09 PM
What a nice philosophical take on the prompt.
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rabbi neil fleischmann
August 10, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Thank you for the beautiful feedback.
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