My Haiku
Wednesday, June 24, 2015
Tear Haiku
Pulled or ripped apart
as if shredded to pieces
How I feel sometimes
Sometimes there are holes
because something's been pulled at
with way too much force
The drops of liquid
your eyes release when you cry
say more than your words
Prompted by
Haiku Horizons
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Anonymous
June 24, 2015 at 2:44 AM
Excellent, so well done.
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Alice
June 24, 2015 at 10:19 PM
Well done and too true.
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J Cosmo Newbery
June 28, 2015 at 6:25 AM
Much wisdom in this.
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Bastet's Waka Library
June 28, 2015 at 9:02 AM
nicely written ... bravo.
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Excellent, so well done.
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ReplyDeleteMuch wisdom in this.
ReplyDeletenicely written ... bravo.
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