We pass our time back
as every second passes
Tests we hope we passed
A wedding - not ours
My circle passed your circle
and we almost touched
Please pass the water
is what I say, while thinking
about other thirsts
3 passes to 4
as I write instead of sleep
and silently pray
prompted sand inspired by
https://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/
A nice set. I really like the second one.
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ReplyDeletePlease pass the water.... I really like this one the best. It is deep in implied meaning.
https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2015/04/19/good-and-gold/
lovely read .. lovey many layered series!
ReplyDeleteI like the third one...very nicely done!
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